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mariamlelue
Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:30 pm Reply with quote
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Salaam moros Cool
I hope everythings going smoothely for you all isA
I just want to share with you a blog I recently started
your comments are greatly appreciated
keep it real moros
stay blessed, safe and strong
take care
your trini moro
Le-Ann


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outlandish4life
Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:33 pm Reply with quote
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Hey MAriamlelue It's been a long time Very Happy

It's a really nice site Wink
I liked this poem:

Ongoing Struggle

Vision blurred in the fallen darkness,
Forever contemplating in this solitary abyss,
Inevitably sensing the world is terribly amiss,
As the devils continue to deliver their death kiss,
My screams fall upon deafened ears,
Distant eyes echo my growing fears,
Oblivious to the burning tears,
Flowing with all my hopes, dreams and cares,
Mocking pretenders plague this land,
Traitors laugh as I humbly stand,
My future an open book in God’s hand,
Their hearts sealed unable to understand,
From the innocence of the honest they plunder,
Sworn to cast us asunder,
Leaving the broken heart to wonder,
Breaking under the forces that thunder,
Keeping the faith, I will never surrender,
Desperately hoping for the arrival of a defender,
To survive the onslaught of the present,
In a time where justice is absent,
Patient throughout every torment,
Forgive my transgressions ever so prevalent,
With remorseful tears I sincerely repent,
Fragile faith forever penitent,
In dire need of a guiding light,
Wishing the sun would rise over this morbid night,
Barren hearts ignorant to my plight,
Ongoing battle forever testing one’s might,
To the last drop of blood I fight,
Bestow upon me all that is right,
Barriers removed revealing true sight,
Our blood is one, together we unite,
Will the deaf ever hear my plead?
Everywhere rampant destruction plants its seed,
All are victims of materialistic greed,
Exploiting this vulnerable creed,
Resulting in deprivation of those truly in need,
The call to the faithful unwilling to heed,
Falsely appointing the blind to lead,
Recurring wounds continue to bleed,
On fickle minds, the wicked feed,
Deeds stink with lustful intention,
Its foul stench devours any good action,
Systematically destroying any chance for salvation,
The game of guilt sets fire to any sacred emotion,
Relinquish the evil, a deliverance from temptation,
Seeking the peace to silence our frustration,
An enemy disguised as the soul’s mate,
Feverishly feeding on revengeful hate,
Man is responsible for their present state,
Hope lost but seldom too late,
Rekindle the flame of the lost faith,
The end to our inner struggles we await,
Only with shahadah on our lips may we breathe our ultimate.

just to make sure:You wrote it right??

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Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 8:58 pm Reply with quote
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Oh and I like the song 2 Wink

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Sanya
Posted: Tue Sep 16, 2008 9:25 pm Reply with quote
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wow Surprised Surprised Surprised
I love it!!congratz u must b proud!!! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy

thnx 4 sharin

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sanya
xxxx
mwah!!
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p.s ma speakers were on full blast nd the song scred me hlf to death!!!! Laughing Razz

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Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 12:06 am Reply with quote
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mariamlelue
Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 2:50 am Reply with quote
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Awww yeah its true its been so long honey
yeah i wrote it ..everything there i wrote myself Very Happy Oops
thanks for your comments and keep reading Very Happy
oh sanya honey thanks to u too Love1
and the song is Theghri by Souad Massi Very Happy Cool
i love her voice and songs
ok take care both of you
salam and thanks again
God bless Love1

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Sanya
Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 3:40 pm Reply with quote
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ur welcome hunnie!! Kiss

OML!! u wote it all by urself!!!! wow!!! its wicked hunnie!! keep up da good work!!!!!!!! mwah!!!! lots ov love
God bless Sanya
xxx
Kiss
mwah!!

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Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 4:25 pm Reply with quote
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wow!! its really gud MashAllah!!

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Posted: Wed Sep 17, 2008 8:06 pm Reply with quote
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Ur welcome mariamlelue Very Happy

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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 8:23 pm Reply with quote
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Salaam dears
thanks again sanya and outlandish4life Very Happy
thanks miriam Very Happy
tc all

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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 8:29 pm Reply with quote
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UR WELCOME!! Very Happy
I love ur poems! Smile

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Posted: Mon Sep 22, 2008 8:46 pm Reply with quote
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outlandish4life wrote:
UR WELCOME!! Very Happy
I love ur poems! Smile


welcomez!!
i love em too!! Kiss

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