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Hamza
Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:05 am Reply with quote
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Hello Guys. How you doin ?

I love Music, and love to make Music. So here's my first track. Would be glad about comments. Hope you like it. This song contains really much feelings. I wrote this song in two days before have my gig @school. Enjoy Smile


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Here is the downloadlink :http://www.4shared.com/file/171197458/4012eb38/Hamza_-_Dont_Have_To_Cry.html]Hamza - Don't Have To Cry.mp3



My failed gig @school xD : http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Cv1HQ7egftE


EDIT: Other Tracks Below


Here are the Lyrics :

[quote]Intro/Refrain:

You don't have to cry
Forget them completely
Just have to say goodbye
Don't copy them immediately
No place for mentally thoughts
Fighting against each other
To get the "weapon award"


Part 1


We out of control,
Got Crazy !
The crime rate,
It is amazing!
These lines were written in two days,
Cause I opened my soul like a page.
These killing machines are always staying tough
Do you know how it is ? ,
To be treated like stuff
We've been around the world
Lookin' for change
But what we achieve is a terrible age
You're flying so high
You will get nothin !
You will never reach the sky,
So why you're always laughing
Follow your illusion
You will get a revelution
Get the pain
Louse your aims
And get an exclusion
It is Allah who guide me through the pain,
Who guide me through the misery,
Who guide me through the "rain"
Who guide me through the fights
Who guide me to the "light"
Trust in your faith and all will be alright !
The real ones are thankful to have a life,
The other construct tanks to fight
Try to be on the w/right side,
Don't be a "wall",
Don't forget the truth,
You have to stay tall !

2x Refrain

You don't have to cry
Forget them completely
Just have to say goodbye
Don't copy them immediately
No place for mentally thoughts
Fighting against each other
To get the "weapon award"


Part 2


Your brain is so corrupt
It is so fearsome
Look the bloody pictures
For you handsome
Look the cryptic faces
See what you've done
Feel the real
Get out of your funs !
Have you seen the pictures of Palestine ?
Have you seen the methods how my siblings died ?
Oh I forgot you're a specialist
Media lyies like a bunch of psychologists
Forgot the history
Forgot the mistakes
Life of insanity
Live like a ape
Live kile a beast
Act without reasons
Devour your focus
Now it's open season
What happened with our beliefs
Forgot the Lord
Displace the peace
We have to afford
Have to afford a live of veracity
Day by day, we're lousin our capacity
But I know there is a drop of hope
Sure !
You have to unknot that "knotted rope"
You !
You have to follow the right path
The path of honesty
Don't be afraid
We will all be free

3x Refrain

You don't have to cry
Forget them completely
Just have to say goodbye
Don't copy them immediately
No place for mentally thoughts
Fighting against each other
To get the "weapon award"

_________________________________________________________


2nd Track called Whatever. The text is about youth who live in poverty
and war. The kids & teenagers are on an another Level as the others.
Remembering the bad situation in Palestine, I wrote this lyrics.

Download:

http://www.4shared.com/file/147595082/cea76cf3/Hamza_-_Whatever.html


Lyrics:

Part 1:


Has to feed his parents
And his brothers
Working all day
While watchin' the others;
The Others !
On their way to school with their schoolbags
His only wish is to read books and texts
Like a prisinor strictly guarded
Any wrong move their guns are loades
Raised to be a man
Body of a child
Intelligent, knows the importance of his life
At work burning sun makes him dizzy
What a strange soul his patience amazing
The only chance to survive in this life
Is to be brave and to -end- this fight;
This fight !
-Not reachable-, bloody and eternal, unbearable
His fears; it's time to leave; the reality
Return to our beliefs !


Refrain 2x:

Whatever happen to my people happen to me
I want to save you
I want you to be free



Part 2:


Has to feed his parents
And his brothers
At all costs he wants to save his mother;
His mother !
Fear made her going mad
Evereyday waiting until her son comes back
Scary pictures and memories
Wants to forget all that
Incurable disease !
Late night finally intermission
Everyday and always the same ambition
His home scattered by air raids
Apologize ?
It's too late
The only chance to survive in this life
Is to keep the faith and to follow the right;
The right !
Misunderstanded;
Lost in the middle of the ocean;
Stranded !
His dream to become a lawyer
To let the justice win
A true warrior


Refrain 4x:

Whatever happen to my people happen to me
I want to save you
I want you to be free


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themajor
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 6:56 pm Reply with quote
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hey friend i'm downloading it right now..i'm sure it'll be a nice first trak.. Very Happy


good luck Smile

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Divya
Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:57 pm Reply with quote
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Thx for sharing wiv us! Smile they are good lyrics!
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Hamza
Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 2:13 pm Reply with quote
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Coool. Thank You Very Much Smile

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welcome friend... Very Happy

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Hamza
Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 5:11 pm Reply with quote
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LoL Thanks for the Pic. And the emoticons xD

How do you like the song ? :-]
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Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 6:56 pm Reply with quote
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ure welcome...


hey..i really like ure song!! the lyric is so meaningful and the rhythm is good too.. Smile it has a lil prob with balance of music and ure voice that i think it would be better if u recorded it in a Digital studio with high effects.. Smile but in ure case i like ure song.... and Hamza i really enjoyed the end of the song when u say softly " yea.....Don't have to cry....."...such a good ending.. Razz
i wish u best of lucks and a successful future in music... Very Happy

Thanks for sharing ure song with us

keep working! Smile

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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 10:41 am Reply with quote
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hey btw..ma mum said to tell u,she liked ure song vey much...she says that she feels a power in ure voice.. Razz
she wishes the best 4 u hamza.. Smile
i wrote ure song track on a CD 4 car to listen it!! Very Happy Very Happy

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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:35 pm Reply with quote
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awwwww ur mum is lovely anahita!! Very Happy give her a big kiss from me!! Razz

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Hamza
Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 3:01 pm Reply with quote
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Super Super Cool.

Thank you very much. And big Thanks to your Mother.
When a mother said that she likes a song: It's the Truth.





Peace To Y'all.
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